Thursday, July 28, 2005

Freeflow 1

proud and
tall, anchored
firmly in the forest

skyward_________summer_________afternoon_________Fairy Toy

This heart
is the symbol
of love. Red
and big, it will
always say
I love

noisy, free
flows, tumbles, twists
exciting, frightening, energetic, exhilarating

The hand

big or small
gives and takes
The hand

Olivia Klonaris 1989


Steliano Ponticos said...

the first part is about a tree and looks like a tree :)

Olivia said...

Aie! When I publish it all the spacing and formatting is taken out!!!

Olivia said...

OK, fixed it up a bit, it will have to do.

Caesura said...

Hey! Cool! I love the tree one! and the heart one and the river! I love the tree shape. Very nice. Great job olivia.

Olivia said...

Thanks Hop-Along-C! The tree is a hit!

It's quite strange looking at things I wrote 16 years naive...But - I know this would be harder to do now.

Steliano Ponticos said...

Olive now its even better and the heart is really cool...even the last one looks a bit like a hand..

Olivia said...

Really? Thanks. I have to look again.

Jia Li said...

this is cool

Olivia said...

Jia Li, it's good to see you here. Sorry you're not getting better :(

Ali said...

As they say in a poetry session in my country - called a "Sheri" - Wah Wah Wah!

Olivia said...

Welcome Shah Jahan, thank you for your comment. Is a poetry session called a Sheri in your country?

Your profile pic is quite a famous image.

Ali said...

Yup, a poetry session - well not poetry in the sense of poetry. Poetry is actually known as a Ghazil - people who recite a ghazil are known as a shier. I'd like to write it in perso-arabic script, but I dont' want look up the characgters.

Yes, my image is quite famous. It's an amazing image showing the dialogue that the Mughal Empire had with Italian Renaissance artists.

Anonymous said...

wow, this is awesome. 16yrs ago, you have always been a talented writer. I have to agree with everyone, the tree rocks.

Anonymous said...

hey ms. olivia! very nice poetry! i am so excited that you are sharing all this! more! more! we adore you!

ms. moonglow

Olivia said...

Hey Vanessa and Ms M -

Thank you ladies! Maybe I will put some up today - but oh my goodness, my blog queue is getting soooo long.